Monday, October 4, 2010

Have to get the smart sit.

Have to get the smart seat.

By: Michael

In class, Percy always got a D in all subjects. He blamed his seat made him stupid, and he wanted a high grades. Percy changed his seat all the time. Nothing helped him, until he decided: “I’m dumb not because of my sit; I’m dump because of the place I live.” He immigrated all countries in Western Europe to Japan, Canada to Mexico, he’d been in all continents of earth. All the grades he gots, is lower than F.

Once he played soccer, and thought he was good at it. Percy flew to Brazil and joined a team. Stopped studying and changed to practicing soccer. Later, he nearly became an ace in the team. Percy thought he finally settled at one place. When the important match came, he picked up the soccer ball right in the start of the game and got red card. “What should I do now?” Percy miserably asked himself: “I can’t even remember the simplest rules of soccer! What in the world I will be able to do?”

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you write your introduction, it draws the readers attention to your story, keep up the good work.

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  2. It was a creative essay I've read. Besides, you can show us about the main character though not clear enough. I still love it. Keep working!

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